Hallo Leute, 
wollte mich für ein Auslandssemester bewerben, dafür fertige ich einen LEtter of Motivation an. Nun die Frage weil ich nicht weiß was ich da noch reinschreiben soll um eine Seite vollzukriegen, weiß jemand von euch noch was ich da verbessern könnte oder so etwas in der Richtung?
DAnke für Antworten,
Kingfisher
So hier nun der Letter:
Letter of motivation:
To the University of Trondheim, sor Trondelag:
In the following writing I will shortly introduce myself and explain, why I apply just at your Univesity:
My name is XXX, I am 21 years old, and currently I am in the 3 rd semester of the offered Bachelor programme of Biology in Rheinbach.
The expected date of my graduation will be in August of 2006.
An abroad stay is particular attractive for me, as I consider new life chapters always as a challenge. The dealing with some new people and the adaptation to a new environment in a foreign country is something very special and inevitable for me, especially in view of the given possibilities for the BSc students of Biology in Rheinbach.
In the summer 2000 I visited Norway and kept it as lovely land in memory, not least of all because of its amazing Fjords, landscapes, red coast houses.
As I planned to study after my BSc in Rheinbach the Master programme Fishery Sciences and Aquaculture, Norway is a very appropriate land, not at least due to the huge amount of fish farmings and fish industry which are present there. At a later application in these professional branches an abroad stay in Norway would be with certainty a benefit for the employer.
Perhaps I will have there the opportunity to gain some work experience or get some insights into the local industry.
Additionally I am determined to learn a new language, as I feel it as an advantage to master more and other languages than the majority.
Furthermore I think that this abroad year will make myself more independent and increase my life experience.